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求助信
写英文求助信的原因是目前自己遇到了一些困难,需要请求对方帮助,因此整篇文章应用一般现在时表达文意。通常包括三部分内容:
1. 表明写信目的,请求帮助。
2. 要清晰陈述请求帮助的具体内容。
3. 希望得到帮助。注意语气委婉、真诚,并要向收信人表示感谢。
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必背句型
起首句(the opening sentence)
I am writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favor.
I am writing to ask whether you could do me a favour.
我写信希望你能帮我一个忙。
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正文---表明困难
1. I have some difficulty in doing...., which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.我在做......方面有困难,这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向你求助。
例句: I have some difficulty in getting along with others, which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.我在做与别人相处方面有困难,这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向你求助。
2. I am encountering some problems in ______, which troubles me a lot. 我在......方面遇到一些问题,这很困扰我。
例句: I am encountering some problems in learning English, which troubles me a lot.
我在学英语方面遇到一些问题,这很困扰我。
3. What bothers me is that…困扰我的事是......
例句: What bothers me is that I don’t know how to improve my listening.
困扰我的事是我不知道如何提高听力。
4. I’ve found that my problem lies mainly in 2 aspects. For one thing, ...; for another, …
我发现我的问题主要在两个方面。一方面,......;另一方面,......
例句: I’ve found that my problem lies mainly in 2 aspects. For one thing, I don';t know whether there are any grammar mistakes in my application; for another, I wonder if you can help me with the format.
我发现我的问题主要在两个方面。一方面,我不知道我写的申请是否有语法错误;另一方面,我想请你帮我看看格式(format)是否正确。
5. Not only do I have some difficulties in… but also in …我不仅在......而且在......方面也有问题。
例句: Not only do I have some difficulties in reading but also in writing
我不仅在阅读而且在写作方面也有问题。
6. I wonder if you can...我想知道你是否能......
例句: I wonder if you can offer me some guidance on how to improve my speaking and listening skills.
我想知道你是否能给我提供一些关于如何提高我的英语听说能力的指导。
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结束语 ; (the closing sentence)
展望自己获得建议后可能会取得的进步
I';m sure with your help I can make great progress.
I think I will surely benefit a lot with your valuable advice.
表明获取信息的急切心情
I sincerely hope you can give me some useful advice.
I would appreciate it if you could be so kind as to give me some useful advice.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
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求助信模板
Dear __________,
 ; ;  ;I’m Li Hua, a student from Senior Three./How';s everything going?I am writing to ask whether you could do me a favour. ;
 ; ; ; I am encountering some problems in ______, which bothers me a lot. To begin with, I have a lot of trouble in ______. What’s more, , I’m very upset that __________. Last but not least, my biggest headache/problem is ________. Faced with the above problems, I am anxious to get your help. I';m sure with your help I can make great progress.
 ; ; ; I would appreciate it if you could be so kind as to give me some useful advice.  ; ;
 ;  ; ;Looking forward to your early reply. ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;
Yours,
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美文欣赏
假定你是李华,你正在为高考紧张复习,但最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习。于是你给你校的外籍心理老师Kate写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下:
1. 作业多,没有时间运动。2. 压力大,难以入睡。3. 希望得到Kate的帮助。
注意:1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Kate,
 ; ; ; I am Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. Recently, I’ve been busy preparing for my College Entrance Exam, but unfortunately I find it quite hard to concentrate on my study. So I’m writing to ask you for help.
 ; ; ; I’m encountering some problems which trouble me a lot. First, I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports. Moreover, the high expectation from the teachers and my parents makes me extremely stressful because I don’t want to let them down. What troubles me most is that it’s difficult for me to fall asleep every night.
 ; ; ; Faced with the above problems, I’m anxious to get your help. Could you please offer me some advice on how to solve these problems?
yours,
Li Hua
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求助信
班别:___________ ; 学号:___________ ; ; 姓名:___________
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你是高一学生李华,英语学习上遇到了困难,写信向Ms Song寻求建议,要求包含以下内容:
1.单词多,很难记住;2.课文太长,难以背诵(recite);
3.写作有困难; ; ; ; ; ; 4. ; 向Ms Song寻求学习英语的方法。
要求:不要逐字逐条翻译,可适当增加细节,词数80左右。
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Dear  ; Sir or Madam, |
Looking forward  ; to your early reply. ;  ; |
Yours, |
Li Hua |
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