「培训」考向33 人与自然

考向33 人与自然

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场景描写 场景描写是以人物为中心的环境描写，一般由人、事和环境组成。包括了自然环境和社会环境描写。自然环境描写包括人物活动的时间、地点、季节气候以及景物。社会环境描写是对特定的时代背景和人物生活环境的描写。描写的内容可以是室内陈设、当地风土人情或时代气氛等。场景描写特点：有全貌有细节，有全景有特写，点面结合，重点突出。1.要交代场景的背景。如时间、地点、环境等。2.运用点面结合。有整体的概括也有重点的具体描写。3.运用好五感官，写出气氛。

1.Bright sunlight ； ；明媚的阳光

2. The rain like a deluge(n. 洪水；暴雨；泛滥） ； ；倾盆大雨

3. ；The peaceful fields ； ；宁静的田野

4. ；The twinkling stars ；闪烁的星星

5. ；Clouds gather, driven by the rising wind ； 风起云涌

1．The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring, with the sun shining and birds singing.公园里充满了春天的清新和美丽，阳光灿烂，鸟儿歌唱。

2．Mist­covered mountains were dotted with small farms and villages.薄雾笼罩的大山点缀着小农场和村庄。

3．The sound of my footsteps was accompanied only by the gracefully waving reeds.那优美的芦苇摇曳的声音伴随着我的脚步声。

4．A gust of wind blew and parted the drooping branches of the willow like a curtain.一阵风吹过，吹起了柳树的低垂枝条，就像卷起的窗帘。

5．And from below, the faint sound of water was tumbling through the valley.

从下面，微弱的水声翻腾着穿过山谷。

6．A little way off was a little brook, rushing and sparking along between green banks.不远处有一条闪闪发光的小溪，在绿色的河岸之间奔流而下。

7．The sun was beginning to set, glittering red through the rows of buildings.

太阳开始落山了，在一排排的建筑物中闪烁出红光。

8．The water was deep blue, and the sunlight glittered on its crystal clear surface.

水是深蓝色的，阳光在水晶般清晰的水面上闪闪发光。

9．A cold breeze blew through her soft hair.一阵冷风吹过她柔软的头发。

10．On a nearby hill, he could see smoke waving slowly skywards from the chimney of his house.

在附近的一座山上，他可以看到烟从他房子的烟囱里慢慢地飘向天空。

11．A gentle breeze blew through Jennifer'；s hair.The golden red sun was setting.She was on the beach, looking up at the fiery ball.She was amazed by its color, deep red in the middle, softly fading into yellow.She could hear nothing but the waves and the seagulls flying up above in the sky.

一阵微风吹过詹妮弗的头发。金红色的太阳正在落山。她在海滩上，抬头看着火红的球。她被它的颜色惊呆了，中间是深红色，慢慢褪色变黄。她什么也听不见，除了波涛和海鸥在天空中飞翔。

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Writing 1

（2020·浙江·高考真题）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

“I'；m going to miss you so much, Poppy, "；said the tall, thin teenager. He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye. He stood up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions(情绪)get the better of him.

His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control. They had driven their son several hours out of town to the university where he would soon be living and studying. It was time to say goodbye for now at least. The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes and then laughed.

The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder, and flashed a bright smile.” I guess this is it, “he said.” I'；ll see you back home in a month, okay？"；His parents nodded, and they watched as he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents. The boy'；s mother turned to the dog, “Okay, Poppy, time to go back home.”

The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there. All that week, Poppy didn'；t seem interested in her dinner, her favorite toy, or even in her daily walk. Her owners were sad too, but they knew their son would be back to visit. Poppy didn'；t.

They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit on the sofa, but the old girl just wasn'；t her usual cheerful self. Her owners started to get worried. "；What should we do to cheer Poppy up？"；asked Dad. “We'；ve tried everything.”

“I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy, “smiled Mom.” Without anybody left in the house but us, this place could use a bit of fun. Let'；s get a little dog for Poppy."；

It didn'；t take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box. Poppy welcomed them home as usual, but when she saw the box, she stopped. She put her nose on it. Her tail began wagging(摆动)ever so slowly, then faster as she caught the smell.

注意:

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Para 1. Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.

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 ； ； ； ； Dad put the box on the ground and opened the top. A shiny little wet nose popped up. Then two fluffy paws. Next the box tipped over sideways, and out tumbled a mass of wiggly golden silliness. Poppy was amazed. She wagged furiously. She barked with joy. She smiled, her tongue lolling out as she investigated the surprise. The little pup was not shy and immediately starting yipping and jumping around the older dog. “That didn’t take long,” remarked Mom, as both dogs went roaring around the house in an impromptu game of chase. Dad laughed.

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 ； ； ； ； A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university. He had missed Poppy and was looking forward to seeing her. When he bent down to give her a big hug, he fell over in surprise as a small golden cloud came racing up to lick his face too. “Oh my gosh, who is this?” he exclaimed. His parents laughed at the look of shock on his face. “That’s Pee-wee,” said Dad. “I can’t believe you got yourselves a puppy!” “We didn’t,” replied Mom. “This puppy is for Poppy!”

【分析】这是一篇读后续写作文。

【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，文章讲述了男孩要去上大学，和自己的狗Poppy道别。而没有了男孩在家里，Poppy也非常想念男孩，于是男孩父母决定给Poppy买一条小狗作伴。

续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：爸爸打开盒子，一条可爱的小狗出现了。所以后文应该是描写买来的小狗的样子以及这两只狗的相处情况；第二段开头是：几个星期后，男孩从大学回到家里。本段应该写男孩回到家以后看到两条狗的反应，以及父母告诉男孩这条狗是买给Poppy的。

续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。

【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：a mass of，with joy，look forward to等高级词汇；非谓语动词的运用The little pup was not shy and immediately starting yipping and jumping around the older dog.；时间状语从句When he bent down to give her a big hug, he fell over in surprise as a small golden cloud came racing up to lick his face too.等高级句式。

Writing 2

（2018·浙江·高考真题）It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.

We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.

His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. "；The day starts at dawn on my farm,"； he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.

In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. "；Don’t be late for supper,"； Uncle Paul cried, "；and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!"； "；OK! "； my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.

Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.

注意：

（1）所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；

（2）至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：

（3）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

（4）续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. ____________

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 ； ； ； ； ； ； Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. My horse turned to the left to avoid the little rabbit as I held on tightly and tried not to fall. Then my dad turned around and shouted, “Hold on!” All of a sudden the horse began to run. My dad tried to keep up behind us. For a few minutes my horse slowed down to a trot and then stopped beside a river. I looked around and realized that we were way off the track.

We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Luckily the stars came out and gave us a little light when we were looking for the way to the farm house. After what must have been several hours, we suddenly heard the sound of sheep in the distance. My dad and I both rode our horses towards the sound of the sheep. As we got closer we saw Uncle Paul with a flashlight waving us over. What a night!

【详解】读后续写要求考生首先要读懂已有信息，不仅能读懂字面含义，还要理清文章的脉络。续篇这篇短文时，考生要搞清楚故事的发展进程、前因后果、地理位置、人物思想情感的变化等。在此基础上，考生要顺着文章的思路，根据线索，发挥想象，对其后的情节进行合理预测，并用语言表达出来。

通过阅读所给文章可知，父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马，儿子也很想骑，于是亲身上马体验。

根据第一段所给首句Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.这一句是故事发展的转折点，可从rabbit出现后带来的反应扩展开，可以写马的反应，也可以写人的反应，但要注意与第二段首句相呼应。

第二段首句是We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.这一句呼应前文Uncle Paul的叮嘱——不要误吃晚饭，可从如何寻路返回农场去写。

续写时注意要使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后要用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Writing 3

（2017·浙江·高考真题）

On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled (骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.

Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that'；s a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.

Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of hear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac'；s relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac'；s bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase（追赶）。

Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to show down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.

At this moment, Paul and Beeky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.

注意：

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3. 续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；

4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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 ； ； ； ； ； ； The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Paul and Becky got out of the car immediately to give the help. With nothing in the hand, they didn'；t dare to fight against the wolf. However, they still approached to the wolf bravely. At the same time, the wolf also noticed them and turned its head back, howling angrily towards Paul and Becky. Mac then jumped off the bicycle and was ready to fight against the wolf. Then came the deadlock.

A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. They found the dangerous situation, where three men circled the wolf. Mac'；s friends also jumped off their bicycles and joined the fight with the wolf. More and more cars stopped. Some drivers took out the sticks from the cars, and some took out the knives, even the guns towards the wolf. In the meanwhile, the wolf might feel the people'；s threats around, so it began to step back slowly. Soon, it ran away off the road and disappeared in the distance.

【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写，要求续写两段内容（Paul和 Becky勇救Mac，试图赶走狼，但没有成功）以及（越来越多的人加入到救援之中，最后成功地赶跑了狼）。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一篇读后续写：本文主要讲述了Mac在骑自行车前往阿拉斯加的途中，被一只狼追赶的故事，第一段要求续写车上下来两个人帮助Mac，但他们势单力薄，并没能赶走狼，双方陷入僵局；第二段要求续写越来越多的人加入到救援之中，众人合力将狼赶走。时态以一般过去时为主，人称以第三人称为主。同时要兼顾字数的要求，不要过多，关键词列出5个以上，需要均匀分布在两段中。考生要注意几个关键信息和情节变化并结合给出的内容提示进行合理构思。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； immediately（立即），dangerous（危险的），howl （嚎叫），threat（威胁），join（加入）， bravely（勇敢地）及deadlock（僵局）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。

【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有fight against（对抗），run away（跑掉），get out of (从……中出来)，be ready to do（准备好做某事），dare to do（敢做某事）以及approach to（靠近），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“They found the dangerous situation, where three men circled the wolf.”，倒装句“Then came the deadlock.”，非谓语动词“At the same time, the wolf also noticed them and turned its head back, howling angrily towards Paul and Becky.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。

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Writing 1

The Biggest Dog on the Mountain

We liked hiking together. Today, we were looking for a trail over Wallace Mountain.

”It’s been over an hour,” said Jessc, my nineteen-year-old son. “Do you think the trail still exists?” We had explored several paths but with no luck. We pushed through weeds mid-calf high for us, but neck-high for our rusty-brown dog, Shadow. Once in a while, we would call Shadow back when she was attracted by the pleasant smell of flowers. No longer slim and bouncing with energy, Shadow was the size of a large house cat, and always content to curl up on the couch beside one of us.

Suddenly, we heard what sounded like many dogs barking in the distance, an unusual sound in the wilderness around us. Curious, we climbed the ridge (山脉), only to find what seemed like a dog factory. Small dogs, big dogs, brown dogs, and dogs I can’t even describe poured out. The hounds (猎狗) hit the ground, sniffing the air and turning to face us. Before long, they went down from their side of the mountain. Jesse shot an alarmed glance at me before turning to call in a firm voice, “Shadow, come here, stay.”

I patted my pockets, feeling for the pepper spray (防狼喷雾), so small it would never work against so many animals. I turned, surveying the nearby brush for a potential weapon. With the help of adrenaline (肾上腺素), I broke off two thick branches from a tree and rushed to Jesse’s side, “Here you are!” “OK,” he said, “Dad, they are coming to us.” My-mouth went dry. I glanced over at Jesse, his lips pinched (夹紧) tight.

The pack emerged from the valley, marching straight toward us. The dogs in the lead were now close enough for us to see that most of them were three times larger than Shadow. With deep growls (怒吼声)，they ran straight for us. Jesse swallowed hard and looked at me.

注意：

1．续写词数应为150左右；

2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Shadow’s back fur rose.

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Surprisingly, the entire mass of dogs turned tail and fled.

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Writing 2

When my daughters reached the third and fourth grades, I sometimes allowed them to walk to and from school alone if the weather permitted. One warm spring day, a little dog followed them home after school. It had short legs and long lovely ears. It was the cutest dog I had ever seen and the girls begged me to keep it.

The dog was about twelve weeks old. It had no collar(项圈) or identifying marks of any sort. I didn’t know what to do. I thought about posting an advertisement but I really didn’t want to. It would break the kids’ hearts if someone should show up. Besides, its owners should have watched it more closely.

By the end of the week the dog was part of our family. It was very intelligent and good with the girls. The following week something told me to check the lost—and—found section in the local paper. One particular advertisement jumped out at me and my heart beat with fear for what I read. Someone was begging for the return of a lost dog in the neighborhood of our grade school. They sounded extremely eager. My hand shook, couldn’t bring myself to pick up the paper.

Instead, I pretended I hadn’t seen the advertisement. I quickly put paper away in the drawer and continued with my dusting. I never said a word about it to the kids or my husband.

By now we had named the dog. It looked like a Molly, so that was what we called it. It followed the girls everywhere they went. When they went outside, it was one step behind them. When they did the housework, it was there to lend a hand.

There was only one problem with this seemingly perfect picture: my conscience(良心)was bothering me. I knew in my heart I had to call that number in the paper and see if our Molly was the dog they were desperately seeking. It was the most difficult thing I’ve ever done.

注意:

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

With mixed feelings, I finally picked up the phone.

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I asked the woman to come in and she quickly bent over and hugged Molly tightly.

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Writing 3

My husband, Donald, took our daughter Sarah out for some ice cream the night before driving her to college. As they were walking back to the car, they saw a young man sitting on the ground and giving his puppy a cone.

“A cute dog,” Donald said as they walked by. “A free dog,” the young man replied. Donald asked him what he meant by that and the man explained. He was moving away from Vermont and did not think the travel would be good for the dog. He had raised her from a small puppy. The man said she was a 6-month-old cross between the Doberman and the Labrador named Rhubarb. Donald took his phone number. The rest, as they say, is history.

Rhubarb was a sweet dog and very friendly and loved everyone. Whenever someone came to the house, she was always happy. She also got along with Willie, an older Samoyed we had. Willie was not well and died about a year later, but, fortunately, Rhubarb’s company helped him keep going for longer than that if he had been alone. But the interesting thing about Rhubarb was that she never barked. She would sometimes get excited when she saw a chipmunk (花栗鼠) and make a little crying sound.

One hot night when she was about 4 years old, we went to bed with the windows open and the doors unlocked. At about 3 a.m., I woke up to the sound of Rhubarb barking. I woke Donald and we got out of bed.

Rhubarb was coming toward us. We turned on the lights and noticed the door to the kitchen was open. Then we saw the door leading into the house from the garage was also open. We quickly locked all the doors, and we did not get any sleep that night. It was deep into the night, so we didn’t call the police.

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The next day we noticed there was cigarette ash on the floor.

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My purse was right next to the door.

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Writing 4

It was a lovely spring morning in the mountains of my home. Here was full of natural atmosphere. The sky was blue, the sun was warm, and the air was fresh. As driving along the winding road, I could see thousands of wild flowers in bloom. When I turned round, I slowed down as I saw some volunteers picking up garbage along the side of the road. I just smiled as I saw them doing some cleaning in spring for Mother Earth and my mind suddenly floated back in time to another spring morning long ago.

When my children were younger, I used to walk along a small route around the lake near my home. It was also on a spring morning that I noticed much garbage lying along the route. The next day, I brought a big garbage bag and started to slowly pick up the garbage along my way. All kinds of deserted objects lay all over the floor. There were pop cans, plastic water bottles, wrappers for candy bars, empty chip bags, pieces of broken fishing line and even an old shoe. Every time I stopped, I picked up a piece of garbage. And I even fished some garbage out of the edge of the water. By the time I circled the lake, the garbage bag had been nearly full.

Tired but happy, I put the bag in an empty garbage can. I stopped before I headed home and took one last look at the lake as the sun set. It looked more beautiful than ever and I felt like the angels were looking down upon it with me and sharing my smiles.

I always think that at times this world’s problems can seem overwhelming and you may wonder what you can do to make a difference. But the truth is that every good thing you do matters a lot! I do believe every time I stop to pick up a single piece of garbage, I can make a difference. As my children are adults now, I decide to spend more time protecting the environment.

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

I begin to encourage others to develop the environmental awareness.

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Many days have passed, and the surroundings have improved a lot.

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Writing 5

Surviving Mount Rainier

Bad luck and poor timing left Kart and three climbers stuck on Mount Rainier for several long days. They faced mountain climbing’s toughest tests. One man suffered altitude sickness； ice and rockfall rained down at night； cold nights in a tent that got torn left them hypothermic(体温过低的). Calm confidence, skill and the courage to continue up the route, despite illness and injury, likely saved their lives.

The climbers set out on a Friday, camping low on the route the first night because they were concerned about rockfall after a climber had recently died in an accident at the route’s typical high camp. On Saturday, at about 10,500 feet, one of the climbers became sick from the altitude, which began to slow them down. They needed to keep moving, so they put him in the lead so he could move at a pace he was comfortable with.

By Sunday evening, the ill climber was exhausted, and they had to make an unplanned camp on steep snow. They were in a bad place—on a platform about the size of a table under an ice cliff. The wind got stronger during the night, ripping the tent and snapping the poles. They tried to secure it by placing their packs and rocks around the edges. Finally, they just stuck their feet between the rocks and held the tent with their bodies. It was a cold night.

注意：

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

Paragraph 1:

On Monday, they managed to call 911 but forgot to ask how to communicate with the rangers (护林员) before losing signal.

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Paragraph 2

On Wednesday, they gathered everything and decided to carry on with their climb.

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Writing 6

John reached into his backpack, searching for his cell phone. He was scared of having to spend the spring break at Aunt Letty’s farm. Although he had protested, his parents decided that spending time on the farm would be a great experience for him. They grew up on a farm and believed that responsibility, hard work, and respect for the land were valuable lessons.

“So, have you ever ridden a horse?” Aunt Letty asked, trying to turn his attention away from his phone. “Hmmm, no.” he answered. “Well, we’ve got a nice calm horse I think you’ll like. Hercules — sounds like a beast, but he’s basically a gentle giant — big, but kindhearted!” she said, smiling. John glanced at his aunt, annoyed that he was expected to work. He tried to text a friend but there was no cell reception.

The next few days were busy. The crow of the roosters woke them up, and they had breakfast before dawn. Then they went out to the barn to get the feed while the animals waited to be fed. The afternoons were filled with transporting hay, cleanup, and caring for the animals. At dusk, when the farm was finally quiet, Aunt Letty stretched her arms out and inhaled (吸气), “Just take a deep breath of that sweet country air!” John, exhausted from his chores, was unable to appreciate his work.

On the third day, without warning, Aunt Letty announced, “It’s time to meet Hercules.” She led John into the stables (马厩). Aunt Letty was right. Hercules was remarkable!

Aunt Letty held her hand open for John to take. Reluctantly, he let her guide his hand toward Hercules and allowed the magnificent creature to sniff his palm. Softly, Hercules rubbed its nose and mouth against him.

“It feels like velvet (天鹅绒) !” John beamed(眉开眼笑). An hour later, John was scratching Hercules on his neck and offering him carrots.

That night, as they headed toward the house, John was inspired. His arms spreading wide, he inhaled and said, “Take a breath of that sweet country air!”

注意：

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。

The next morning, John found Aunt Letty waiting outside with Hercules.

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Fascinated by the breathtaking scenery in the countryside, John obviously changed a lot after the ride.

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Writing 7

After a heart operation, I figured taking care of a dog would keep me active. So I went to the animal shelter, where a little dog in a cage caught my eye. Her name was Honey and she was five months old. The worker opened Honey’s cage and I picked her up. We both went to the yard where I picked up a ball and threw it. I sat down, watching Honey run after it. She ran back toward me, ball in mouth. Immediately, I filled out the paperwork and took Honey home.

One morning last year I decided to take Honey out with me. My wife was away for a few days and I didn’t want to leave Honey alone. I took my keys and opened the door of my car. Honey jumped into it and sat in the back seat.

I drove around the road slowly. Just then, a flash of sunlight blinded me. I put my hand up to protect my eyes. I felt the car slipped in the soft soil, and rolled and rolled until I heard a horrible noise. A giant part of the roof hit my leg and chest. I was pinned. With a sharp pain in my chest, I looked over to find Honey was still in the back seat, trembling.

I tried to see if I could unpin myself, but I failed. I fetched my cell phone and dialed 911. Just as I’d feared, I couldn’t get a signal at the bottom of this valley. Robin, my closest neighbor, lived a quarter mile uphill from me. There was no reason she would drive up to my house.

My chest hammered. I reached into my pocket and pulled out the pills. I ate one and took a deep breath. My heartbeat slowed. I knew that I must get Honey out first. There was a hole in the driver’s side window, small but maybe enough. Painfully, I reached over and picked her up. I gently got her through it. I patted her and she jumped to the ground and ran up the side of the valley.

注意：

1. 续写词数应为150左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

My pulse was weakening with the sun set.

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Robin brought Honey to the hospital the next day.

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Writing8

Once, there was a villager called Rajkumar, who was very greedy and loved to take risks. One sunny summer morning, Rajkumar decided to walk his sheep out of his village for grass. After leaving his village, Rajkumar led his sheep to a small hill, which was close to a big forest and far away from his village.

When reaching the hill, Rajkumar looked for green grass. And he found it in the northern hillside. Then he let his sheep stay there to eat grass. One hour later, suddenly it started to rain heavily. To let his sheep escape the rain, Rajkumar led them to a cave nearby. And he tied them there, preventing them from running away.

When the rain became less heavy, feeling bored, Rajkumar left the cave and walked around. Soon he came to the western hillside. He found another cave there. And to his amazement, he saw many big wild goats inside the cave, which were also taking shelter from rain. Rajkumar thought if he could have these goats, he’d be the richest man in his village. So, he decided to use grass to attract them to his village. He knew there was little chance of success because the local wild goats feared humans and didn’t have much trust in humans. But he still wanted to have a try.

Since there was no fresh grass nearby, he came back to the previous hillside and started collecting grass. Soon Rajkumar managed to find a lot of grass. However, he found he didn’t have a rope to tie it. Looking at his sheep he had tied with a rope, he decided to untie them and use the rope to tie the grass. Although that meant the sheep would later probably run away, thinking about so many goats, he thought it was a risk worth taking. So Rajkumar untied his sheep. He tied the grass using the rope.

Carrying the grass, he came to the cave where the wild goats stayed.

注意：续写词数应为150左右；

When he approached, the goats appeared nervous.

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But he was shocked to find the goats had already left and were quickly jumping to the forest.

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参考答案

Writing 1

Shadow’s back fur rose. Down came the group of dogs towards us, roaring angrily. Just as one of them approached us, I raised the pepper spray and spray the liquid to it. Luckily it jumped aside. However, more dogs charged at me, which made the pepper spray useless. Just then, Jesse went up bravely and threw the thick branches around us, making it difficult for the dogs to move near. Meanwhile, Shadow shouted at the dogs aggressively in an attempt to scare them away.

Surprisingly, the entire mass of dogs turned tail and fled. I was glad to see them disappear. I thanked Jesse for her bravery and I patted Shadow on his back. While he was bigger than those dogs, he was not afraid in face of the mass of dogs. We continued to set off to search for our trail.This time, with Shadow leading the way, we would not get lost and soon we found the right trail. After the adventure, we returned home safe and sound thanks to my brave son and the biggest dog.

【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者，他的儿子和狗一起探险的故事。他们一起徒步旅行，在华莱士山寻找一条小径。因为迷路，遇到一群狗攻击，在危机时刻，他们的狗Shadow勇敢吓退一群狗，而保护他们的故事。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“Shadow的背部毛发立了起来。”可知，第一段可描写他们和Shadow在遇到这一群狗之后的表现。

②由第二段首句内容“令人惊讶的是，整群狗都掉头逃跑了。”可知，第二段可描写那群狗退去，他们脱险后的回家以及他们的心理活动。

2.续写线索：徒步旅行——探索——发现一群狗——遭攻击——Shadow吓退狗——回家

3.词汇激活

行为类

寻找：look for /search/seek

回家：go back home/return home

爬：climb /ascend/mount

情绪类

感谢：thank/show our appreciation/show our gratitude/be grateful

害怕的：afraid /dreadful/horrible

【点睛】[高分句型1] Just as one of them approached us, I raised the pepper spray and spray the liquid to it.（由连接词as引导的时间状语从句）

[高分句型2] However，more dogs charged at me, which made the pepper spray useless.（由关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型3] I thanked Jesse for her bravery and I patted Shadow on his back.（由省略that引导的宾语从句）

Writing 2

【答案】 ； ； ； ； ；With mixed feelings, I finally picked up the phone. With butterflies in my stomach, I dialed the telephone number. Secretly I prayed no one would answer, but someone did. The voice on the other end was that of a young woman. After describing the dog to her in detail, she immediately wanted to come over. I said that my daughters love it very much and meanwhile apologized for not having contacted her a few days before. 30 minutes later, the bell rang and Molly was barking. I opened the door, forcing myself to face it.

I asked the woman to come in and she quickly bent over and hugged Molly tightly. Molly started wagging its tail and barking excitedly as if it had recognized someone familiar. Surprised and excited, the woman told me that she couldn’t sleep well without it and thanked us for keeping her dog for these days. She offered to give me some cash as a reward, but I refused. After she took Molly away, I cracked a smile. I knew I had done the right thing―that puppy was exactly where she belonged．

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，主要讲述了一条小狗跟着孩子们来到了作者家，由于小狗很可爱，孩子们特别喜爱它，乞求作者收留小狗。作者心里明白，应该刊登广告寻找狗主人。但为了不伤孩子们的心，作者决定收留小狗。几周后，作者在报纸上看到了一条寻找失踪小狗的信息，而小狗已融入作者家中，所以作者不想打电话联系失主，但仍良心不安，陷入纠结。

【详解】1.段落续写:

①由第一段首句内容“我百感交集，终于拿起了电话”可知，第一段可描写作者打电话之后发生的事。

②由第二段首句内容“我请那个女人进来，她很快弯下腰，紧紧地抱住莫利。”可知，第二段可描写小狗确实是这家人的，虽然不舍，但作者一家归还了小狗，作者认为自己做了正确的事情。

2.续写线索:打电话——确认信息——失主到来——认狗——还狗

3.词汇激活

行为类

①过来：come over/ drop over

②道歉: apologize for /say sorry for

③告诉：tell/inform

情绪类

①开心: crack a smile /happy

②兴奋的：excited/thrilled

【点睛】[高分句型1] I said that my daughters love it very much and meanwhile apologized for not having contacted her a few days before. (that引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] I knew I had done the right thing―that puppy was exactly where she belonged．(where引导的表语从句)

Writing 3

Paragraph 1:

The next day we noticed there was cigarette ash on the floor. Actually, it was a thief who entered our kitchen and garage. Much to our relief, thanks to Rhubarb, the thief stole nothing. I called the police to report the break-in. I also told them nothing had been taken, but they sent a police officer over to talk with us anyway. In fact, recently many local homes had been broken in on the weekend. Most people’s wallets and purses had been stolen.

Paragraph 2:

My purse was right next to the door. However, Rhubarb had scared the thief away before he or she could steal it. When the police officer left, he said we should reward Rhubarb with a big steak dinner. Rhubarb lived to be almost 12 years old, but that night was the only time she barked in her entire life. Fortunately, she never saw the need to warn us of any other danger. We were very thankful to Rhubarb. We loved her like a member of the family.

【导语】本文以作者家里的一条狗为线索展开，讲述了作者收养了一条名叫大黄的拉布拉多杂交犬。这条狗和家人相处愉快，在她大约4岁的时候，她成功吓跑了小偷，保护了作者一家的财物的故事。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“第二天，我们注意到地板上有烟灰。”可知，第一段可描写作者一家发现晚上有人闯入，随后报警的过程。

②由第二段首句内容“我的钱包就在门边。”可知，第二段可描写作者一家发现并没有丢失财物，更加感激狗狗大黄。

2.续写线索：发现有人闯入——报警——警员查看——财物没有丢失——对大黄充满感激

3.词汇激活

行为类

①进入：enter/break into

②打电话：call/ring up/phone

③把……吓跑：scare away/scare off

情绪类

①感激的：thankful / grateful

②幸运地：fortunately/luckily

【点睛】[高分句型1] Actually, it was a thief who entered our kitchen and garage. (运用了强调句型)

[高分句型2] When the police officer left, he said we should reward Rhubarb with a big steak dinner. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句和省略连接词的宾语从句)

Writing 4

I begin to encourage others to develop the environmental awareness. I know that there is power in numbers, and I want to get as many people involved as possible. I’ve convinced my children to take action with me like I did before. We learn to make many cards to hand out to people, with some words about environment protection written on them. We’ve also set up signs around the lake to remind people to pay attention to the environment. Other members of my family also go to the lake to pick up garbage on weekends.

Many days have passed, and the surroundings have improved a lot. Thanks to our efforts, the lake has taken on a new look. The surroundings are clearer and there is no more garbage floating on its water. There is little garbage on either side of the road along the lake. It is surprising that many people take their garbage away. Few people drop garbage here. I am pleased to note that more people actively volunteer to pick up the garbage. This gives us more confidence to protect our nearby environment.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在山上散步时，注意到沿途有许多垃圾，于是作者第二天带了一个大垃圾袋，开始慢慢地沿途捡垃圾。此后，作者决定花更多的时间来保护环境，并号召其他人的加入。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“我开始鼓励其他人发展环保意识。”可知，第一段可描写作者是如何鼓励其他人加入自己的。

②由第二段首句内容“许多天过去了，周围环境有了很大的改善。”可知，第二段可描写作者他们的努力对环境的影响。

2.续写线索：鼓励其他人发展环保意识——分发卡片——周末捡垃圾——环境改善——获得信心

3.词汇激活

行为类

开始：begin/start

培养：develop/foster

注意：pay attention to / keep one'；s eyes open

情绪类

高兴：pleased /glad

惊人的：surprising /astonishing

【点睛】[高分句型1] I know that there is power in numbers, and I want to get as many people involved as possible. (运用了that引导宾语从句)

[高分句型2] It is surprising that many people take their garbage away. (运用了it作形式主语句型)

Writing 5

【答案】One possible version:

On Monday, they managed to call 911 but forgot to ask how to communicate with the rangers (护林员) before losing signal. They set up what was left of the tent as best they could and stayed where they were, praying for the early arrival of their salvation. But for several days, they watched beyond all hope as high winds prevented the rangers’ attempts at a helicopter rescue. Their food was running out and they shared a single bottle of snow melt each day. Then an icefall buried their tent platform and squeezed them together. It was impossible to climb down.

On Wednesday, they gathered everything and decided to carry on with their climb. They climbed up slowly and carefully, resting when they were weak. It didn’t take long until the wind froze them in place. That was the scariest moment. Their spirits began to sink and they started to doubt if they could continue. Kart thought of all the people who loved him, and it really hit him they must be worried. As he tried to climb again and again, he just kept yelling out to his friends, “We have to get there.”However, as they got onto the final slope to the summit, the weather cleared. Suddenly, a helicopter appeared out of nowhere. They were rescued.

【导语】本篇书面表达是读后续写，文章讲述了Kart和三位被困雷尼尔山登山者的遭遇。故事按照时间顺序展开。他们在周五出发，周六，一位队员的高原反应减缓他们的速度，让他们在周日不得不更换临时扎营地点——在冰崖下一个桌子那么大的平台上。糟糕的帐篷的选址以及恶劣的天气使他们帐篷严重受损，让他们度过寒冷的一晚上。周一他们联系上911，但是恶劣天气让救援无法到达，食物要耗尽，此时也无法下山。因此，周三他们聚集所有物品决定继续向上攀登上山，历经艰辛与危险，终于爬到山顶，天气放晴，他们得救了。

【详解】1. 段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“周一，他们设法拨打了911，但在失去信号之前忘记询问如何与护林员沟通。”可知，第一段可描写他们只能在原地等待救援，但是恶劣的天气让救援人员和直升飞机过不来，食品也要耗尽，冰崩让他们本来就很小的地方无法立足，也无法下山。

②由第二段首句内容“星期三，他们收集了所有东西，并决定继续攀登。”可知，第二段可描写他们向上攀登，虽然中途遇到困难，仍然坚持到最后，爬上山顶，得救了。

2. 续写线索：等待救援——希望落空——决定继续攀登——困难重重——克服困难——爬到山顶——得救

3. 词汇激活：

行为类：

①期盼：pray for/expect/hope for

②尽最大努力做某事：try to do/spare no effort to do

③大声喊：yell out /shout out/speak in a loud voice

情绪类：

①失去信心：lose heart/ their spirits begin to sink

②积极：positive attitude/act positively

③害怕：scared/frightened

【点睛】【高分句型1】They set up what was left of the tent as best they could and stayed where they were, praying for the early arrival of their salvation. (由what引导宾语从句、where引导的地点状语从句和非谓语动词作做伴随状语)

【高分句型2】It didn’t take long until the wind froze them in place.(until引导的时间状语从句)

【高分句型3】It was his brave heart and strong faith that could make something unusual happen finally. (由It was...that结构引导的强调句型)

Writing 6

The next morning, John found Aunt Letty waiting outside with Hercules. Running towards them with excitement, John asked Aunt Letty if he could take a ride with her and she nodded approval. So John sat in front of Aunt Letty and they headed slowly towards the riverbank nearby. On arrival, John was totally absorbed in the idyllic scenery: The river water slipped twinkling in the sunlight. The banks were lined with willows, gently swaying in the wind. A refreshing breeze was blowing gently. John closed his eyes, breathing in the earthy smell of soil and appreciating the birdsong. A sense of inner peace he had never experienced in the city swept over him then.

Fascinated by the breathtaking scenery in the countryside, John obviously changed a lot after the ride. He no longer frowned at work but fulfilled his assigned tasks on the farm devotedly instead. When the farm was finally quiet, he would ride Hercules with Aunt Letty / gallop with Aunt Letty, trotting around the beautiful farmland and inhaling the sweet country air. Soon, it was time for John to say goodbye. He stroked Hercules on the neck softly, hugged Aunt Letty and said, “My parents are right. The life here is a great experience for me. Could I spend my next spring break here?” Aunt Letty smiled and said yes.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了约翰的父母让约翰放春假时去莱蒂阿姨的农场度春假，他们认为在农场度过春假对约翰来说是一个很好的经历。但是约翰很害怕去农场。在农场时莱蒂姨妈向约翰提到了一匹性格温顺的马Hercules。后来莱蒂姨妈在没有任何警告的情况下领着约翰去见了Hercules。约翰对这匹马印象很好并受到了启发。

【详解】1.段落续写：

由第一段首句内容“第二天早上，约翰发现蕾蒂姨妈和Hercules在外面等着”可知，第一段可描写约翰蕾与蒂姨妈骑着Hercules一去兜风赏景以及约翰感到内心的平静。

②由第二段首句内容“约翰被乡间令人惊叹的景色迷住了，骑马后显然改变了很多”可知，第二段可描写约翰思想的改变以及体会到父母所说的是对的。

2.续写线索：兜风——内心平静——思想改变——体会父母说的是对的

3.词汇激活

行为类

同意：approval/agreement

完成：fulfill/complete

欣赏：appreciate/enjoy

情绪类

1.极好的：wonderful/great

2.漂亮的：beautiful/pretty

【点睛】[高分句型1]. John closed his eyes, breathing in the earthy smell of soil and appreciating the birdsong. (现在分词作状语)

[高分句型2]. When the farm was finally quiet, he would ride Hercules with Aunt Letty / gallop with Aunt Letty, trotting around the beautiful farmland and inhaling the sweet country air. (when引导的时间状语从句)

Writing 7

My pulse was weakening with the sun set. All I had to do was close my eyes. It seemed only minutes later I heard my neighbor Robin as well as the helicopter overhead. The rescue crew landed and made their way down to me. It took them 45 minutes to cut me out of the car and get me up the valley. We flew to the hospital in the helicopter and I got all sorts of tests and X-rays.

Robin brought Honey to the hospital the next day. She got right up next to me on the bed. With her there, my pain disappeared. “It was the strangest thing,” Robin told me later. “I got home from work and Honey was waiting for me. She ran in circles, like she was trying to tell me something.” Robin figured she’d bring Honey back to my house, and that’s when she dialed 911. How grateful I was for Honey, a life-saving hero in my heart.

【导语】本文以时间为线索。做完心脏手术后，我觉得照顾一只狗能让我保持活力。所以我在动物收容所领养了一只叫做Honey的五个月大的小狗。去年的一个早上，在妻子出差期间，我开车带着Honey外出。在我驾驶时，一道阳光照亮了我，随即我举起手来保护眼睛。这时车子滑了一下，翻滚着到了一个山谷谷底。巨大的车顶压到了我的腿和胸部，我被卡在了车里，我想拨打求救电话却因为害怕无法拨打。之后我从驾驶室的玻璃损伤处把Honey放了外面。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“我的脉搏随着日落而减弱”可知，第一段可描写作我在等待期间，听到了救助的直升机的声音，随后直升机救下我，带我去了医院。

②由第二段首句内容“第二天 罗宾把 Honey 带到了医院”可知，第二段可描写在看到Honey的时候，我感觉身体舒服了一些。随后罗宾告诉我就是因为Honey才让他知道我的情况，随之才有了对我的救援。

2.续写线索：

脉搏减弱——等待——听到直升机声——救助——到了医院——罗宾说明事实——感激

3.词汇激活

行为类

①听到，察觉到：hear/perceive/comprehend/listen to

②告诉：tell/inform/give tongue to/express

③判断，理解：figure/understand/judge

情绪类

奇怪的：strange/queer/odd

感激的：grateful/appreciative/thankful

【点睛】[高分句型1]

Robin figured she’d bring Honey back to my house, and that’s when she dialed 911.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)

[高分句型2]

How grateful I was for Honey, a life-saving hero in my heart.(运用了感叹句)

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When he approached, the goats appeared nervous. Then he stopped and began putting grass before him all the way while walking back. Before long the rain became light. The goats came out to eat the grass but stayed cautious. Soon no grass remained and the goats wouldn’t like to follow him any more. So Rajkumar hurried back to collect grass again. After collecting grass, he ran to the previous spot where the goats had stood.

But he was shocked to find the goats had already left and were quickly jumping to the forest. Worried, he ran fast after them and shouted to stop them. But no single goat turned back, and soon all goats disappeared into the forest. Upset, Rajkumar walked back, deciding to search for his sheep, but in vain. Now his clothes were all wet, and he sat on the ground, regretting the whole thing. After calming down, he finally realized it was his greed and unwise decision that caused his loss.

【导语】本文以设法占有野山羊为线索展开，讲述了一个贪婪的村民Rajkumar想占有山里的野山羊，结果野山羊没到手自己的绵羊也被弄丢了的故事。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“当他走近时，山羊显得很紧张”可知，本段可以描写Rajkumar用青草诱惑野山羊出来的过程。

②由第二段首句内容“但他震惊地发现，山羊已经离开，并迅速跳进森林”可知，本段可以描写Rajkumar没有弄到野山羊，并且自己的绵羊也弄丢了。

2.续写线索：野山羊保持谨慎——草吃光了野山羊不再愿意跟着Rajkumar——Rajkumar很担心大喊着制止野山羊跑走——野山羊和自己的绵羊都不见了，Rajkumar很沮丧

3.词汇激活

行为类

①保持：stay/ keep

②跟随：follow/ go after

③喊叫：shout/ scream

情绪类

①担心的：worried/ concerned

②沮丧的：upset/ depressed

【点睛】[高分句型1]. After collecting grass, he ran to the previous spot where the goats had stood. (运用了where引导限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2]. After calming down, he finally realized it was his greed and unwise decision that caused his loss. (运用了省略that的宾语从句以及it be...that...的强调句)